Hi I'm Anna Gordo, I am a 32 and I live on 1200004500321123 Gordo Street. My husband is a pilot even though he hates, the kids don't know that because then they will think that whatever we don't like they'll hate, I think he really wanted to have a job like mine or a job like his daughters but he doesn't have a choice so what you get is what you get. Me on the other side am a nurturer and I love it, couldn't ask for a better job. We have two kids Sarah a 12 and she works a the House of Old. My other child's name is Tomas he's a 9. Tomas is really exited because he almost has his bike, Sarah has been really helpful with it she is helping him and everything and it works out well. I think Tomas secretly wants to be a pilot and I'm happy for him because he has a dream, I think it's good to have a dream because he will follow that dream and accomplish a lot in life. I am really exited for future things for Tomas and Sarah because I know that they will succeed a lot in life.
Right now I am pretty scared because Tomas and Sarah have been hanging out with more friends more often and recently about 8 kids have ran away. I am afraid that they are going run away because they would want to fit in with the rest if the kids and they want to become the cool people. I can tell that they are planning to run away because they always secretly talking and almost every night they are in each other's room for a long period of time without fighting and usually if they are in the same room with each other for a short amount of time then they are getting into fights and it's not fun. I think that they are going to run away right when Tomas gets his bike.
I like this it is funny. One thing is that when you turn nine you get your bike so Tomas should already have his bike. I like the detail you put in the part how she is worrying that her children will leave her.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said you thought we were going to run away. I also liked how
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ReplyDeleteThat's a really good idea, Corinne! I like that they run away. I don't like that they actually run away but that makes for a dramatic book! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThat I think was really descriptive and gave me a good mental picture. I thought it was kinda cool how you said they were going to run away because it kept me interested.
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