My brother is more than excited to get his bike and I'll admit that I helped him ride it a couple of times. Okay, maybe more than a couple of times. Anyway, I hope he becomes a Nurturer. That would have been my second choice, so if he becomes one, then it's just as good as if I'm one. The way he's going though, I think he going to become a Pilot. That wouldn't be too bad though, because he could fly me around but still...I hope he's a Nurturer. Plus I think that the Nurturers get their wives more quickly because everyone wants to marry a Nurturer. Nobody would mind being with Tomas though, no matter what he is. He's that good looking. Anyway, enough about my brother.
I guess I should also talk about my parents. My mom is a nurturer and my dad is a Pilot. My mom loves her job but I think my dad secretly hates his. I would tell him to apply for an appeal but he'd never admit that he hates his job. My parents don't really talk about themselves so that's all I know.
We'll I think that's enough talk for today. I probably bored you because all the families are like this. The kids aren't all the same age but there are only a few jobs so lots of people have the same job.Well I'm going to go help some old people so I have to go. Bye!
I really like this story and I like the ending, I think I explains the givers society because everyone is the same so everything's boring. I really like how you put this story.
ReplyDeleteI like how you provided lots of information about you're person and description. I also liked how it seems like an actually person; with voice.
ReplyDeleteThat is one big address. Their must be a whole lot o houses in that town for a number like that. Their would have to be at least 1,200,004,500,321,123 houses in that town! That is a lot of houses! Id suggest lowering that number to five digits at the most!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was really cool how you incorporated the event of getting a bike. Also you used words they would use in the giver which makes it even more realistic
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